Just read this book, I cried like a baby when Zillah died. A beautiful book, though. But, I wish Zillah hadn't died. Thank you, you introduced me to it.
After ten years I'm currently re-reading the book and I think your portrayal of Zillah, Twig and Molochai is absolutely perfect! This is exactly how I imagined them to look, both the first time I read Lost Souls and again now.